To improve my Double Page Spread I needed to make the text smaller- from 16pt, which would have been unusual for a magazine, to 11pt. To do this meant I had to add more text, so I added more questions and answers.
To improve the final draft of my contents page I decided to add shadows to all the numbers- white for the red text and red for the white text. This made the numbers stand out more against the dark background. I also remembered to add a page number in the bottom right hand corner.
For my final draft I realised that I had not included the price on my front cover, so I did this twice- at the bottom and at the top of the page, because I had seen this done in other magazines. I also changed the position of my barcode to make the layout of the page more conventional. To do this I had to edit the text and make the 'AND' an '&'.